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What should I improve more on in my pictures? 

37%
105 deviants said butts
23%
65 deviants said Anatomy (All the fat makes it hard to be consistent. DX)
21%
59 deviants said Nothing. Everything is wonderful. (LIES. CHOOSE SOMETHING ELSE. >8C)
12%
34 deviants said DRAW A F***ING BACKGROUND FOR ONCE. >8C (I'M WORKING ON IT DX>)
5%
14 deviants said Color choice (I...guess that's a valid criticism <8C)
3%
9 deviants said Everything. Everything is terrible. (That sounds more correct. <8I)

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:iconkendalljt2nd:
KendallJT2nd Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I can't vote on this...YOUR ART IS AMAZING...honestly it's opened my eyes to more things (: I think you're doin good.
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:iconrelth:
Relth Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I don't mean to alarm you, but I think you're going through something that seems to be the bane of all artists.


These two links may help to explain what I'm talking about.
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:iconrelth:
Relth Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I should probably add that everyone goes down-hill in their own way. Just, FYI.
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:icondarkmagerector:
DarkmageRector Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013
Anatomy. My gf is fat as fuck, so I'm a stickler for when fat doesn't look correct.
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:iconventorro:
Ventorro Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013
Angles, multiples of them.
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:iconsoleron:
Soleron Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2013
I voted everything is wonderful, because it's true.

I most disagree with the "anatomy" criticism voted up, because honestly you're drawing body typesthat doesn't/can't exist so who is anyone to tell you it's wrong, and on the more realistic work (my AB comm/the Twi one) it's perfect.

Your animation skills are far too good for one human being to contain.

If I absolutely had to pick something I'd say you could vary human face types more. They tend to come out looking pretty similar.
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:iconputinforgod:
PutinforGod Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013
I can't vote this, there's not a belly option.
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:icondevyfox111:
DevyFox111 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013
I don't usually comment here, but one of the things I've seen is that you either make a picture where the girl is too fully clothed, or it seems that the picture itself is not trying to be sexual in any way. Now, if you're not trying to be sexual at all, that's all well and good, but some of the deviations are pretty sexual imo and some aren't. Please correct me if I'm wrong :/
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:icontrinity-fate:
Trinity-Fate Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I...don't understand where you're going with this. ^^;
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:iconmaxtheberzerker:
MaxTheBerzerker Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Student
A lot of your faces look the same. You should try fixing that.
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:icontrinity-fate:
Trinity-Fate Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You know I was wondering when somebody was going to point that out to me. I should probably start doing noses too while I'm at it.
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:iconmaxtheberzerker:
MaxTheBerzerker Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013  Student
i'm surprised you didn't make that an option

but yeah, you should definitely work on that
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:iconrocklee2:
RockLee2 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013

I love how heaxy set your characters ar and enjoy your art very much. If you truly want critism......   maybe more frequent art post?

 

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:icontrulymadhatter:
trulymadhatter Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I think if you changed up your art style a bit it would be beneficial
well its always good to do that once in a while XD
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:iconanti-worlder0317:
anti-worlder0317 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013
Anatomy, as much belly as butts
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:iconneeerts:
Neeerts Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013
I'm gonna say anatomy, since you draw the same (very easy on the eyes :V) body types a lot.
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:iconwinterlupo:
winterlupo Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh god i'm the only one who said butts. On a serious note you could try and well give your big girls a bigger butt than gut, fat doesn't just accumulate in the same places evenly for everyone.
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:iconuntrat:
Untrat Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013
I would have voted butts if it were there when I initially voted... .
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:icontrinity-fate:
Trinity-Fate Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Haha, that's probably since I just recently added on the option. I was asked why there wasn't a butts option, so I added one on. XD
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:iconwinterlupo:
winterlupo Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
alrighty then, but serious you need girls with different weight distribution.
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:iconbonusart:
bonusart Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013
Your anatomy is actually pretty consistent; perhaps too consistent. I think you should try and vary your body types more, because almost all of the characters you draw have the same basic shape.
I think your weakest area is the lack of backgrounds and your composition. Unfortunately, I have to admit that I have a problem with both myself. So I can't give you as much advice as I'd like to. But you might try looking up tips on composing, like using the "rule of thirds" more and other things like that. If you were to work on that, I think your pictures would become a lot more dynamic and immersive.
But I see nothing wrong with your color choices and your shadows/highlights are superb.

I hope that provides some helpful insight.
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:icontrinity-fate:
Trinity-Fate Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It really does actually. Thank you for that. I remember learning about the rule of thirds in a high school art class, but I wasn't paying attention completely and pretty much forgot the whole thing.

Also see where you're coming from with the lack of varied body types as well. That may just be from my preferences though. ^^; 
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:iconbonusart:
bonusart Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013
It's only a suggestion. It's your prerogative whether you want to expand your variety or not.
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:iconatlya:
Atlya Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013
I went with "nothing", your style is so refreshing.
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:iconsinisterspider:
sinisterspider Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013
Why would you make all the answers make me feel like I can't give you one without making you feel bad? >_<
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:iconbravefightercorner:
bravefightercorner Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Student General Artist
there is nothing that you really need to improve, but there are many things that we never see you draw, like big breasts,fatter bodies or big bellies(stuffed,pregnant etc), backgrounds are a good idea too
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:icondethmachine5:
dethmachine5 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Honestly I hate these sorta things then random asses come here and ruin the enthusiasm of artists and make them feel bad. Over 90% of the time the rude ones are talentless art thieves, creativity of nats-type artist, camera whores, etc. If they could make valid points then I could at least understand them but it irks me like those 5 deviant jerks. Anyways, you know how to do fat for... Anime(?)/ Chibi type characters which is almost NEVER seen. Most of the time they are tooth picks or hour glasses that have almost no abdomen but all breast and gludeous maximus.So I thank you  ^^. P.S. to cheat for the background is have someone else do it for you thats willing to collab with you.
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:iconbb812:
bb812 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013
You no complaints here though a long term comic would be cool.
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:iconmissmuffintop:
MissMuffinTop Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013   Writer
I love your color palate, it's really vivid!

Anatomy, I guess? It's really good, it's just tricky to do anatomy when shapes get so...three-dimensional x3

I wuv your stuffs though! :3
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:iconiced-equestria:
Iced-Equestria Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013
There's nothing you need to improve on! It's going to be okay OaO
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:iconsekiko:
Sekiko Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
The sauce. You're using too much sauce.
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:iconzintic:
Zintic Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Student General Artist
The most important thing you need improve *points at your brain* is in here.
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:icontrident95:
Trident95 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013
A true artist need only please him or her self. Draw what you like and those who enjoy your work will come. (Your fat Gardevoir is the best fat Gardevoir I've ever seen!)
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:iconzincspider:
Zincspider Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Student Filmographer
Why is there not a butts option. There always needs to be a butt option. 
I'm not voting. 
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:icontrinity-fate:
Trinity-Fate Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Okay, FINE.
There is now a butts option. >8I
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:iconzincspider:
Zincspider Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2013  Student Filmographer
(*pst* but if you really want to know what I think, you're doing really good. I could nitpick, but I'd rather not do that in front of rabbid fans. Especially when it's addressing something you're really good at. Remember though, any time Zinc plays critic, he only wants to help.
Hint: It has to do with shadows on bodies being a bit too dark sometimes.)
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:icontrinity-fate:
Trinity-Fate Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
(Are there any pictures in particular that I used colors that were too dark in so I can maybe try to avoid it in the future?
Also, I wish other people could realize that giving me constructive criticism actually helps me improve and ultimately make better things for their viewing pleasure as you have.)
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:iconzincspider:
Zincspider Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013  Student Filmographer
Let's see... I'll even include pictures I think are great, just so you know that I sill love them:

For the most part, my biggest complaint is the fact that you overuse your skills with light and shadow. It takes up too much of the figure and obscures what the focus of the picture is. I'm no big artist, and I don't have much smertz when it comes to this kinda thing, but that's my observation.
While I realize that you often put characters in a situation where the extreme lighting would make sense (such as in the pic we're working on right now, or the Twilight Sunset), it seems to get to all of your drawings.
Now, I'm not saying you should stop shading like you do. You're good at it. Just tone it down a bit so people can be sure to see what you're drawing.
Otherwise, I'l start calling you J.J.
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:icontrinity-fate:
Trinity-Fate Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I think I see what you're saying. Like sometimes the shading I do in a picture is too intense for the environment the figure is in?

Why would you start calling me J.J.?
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:iconzincspider:
Zincspider Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013  Student Filmographer
Well, mostly that your shading keeps people from seeing the figure all the way period.

J.J. Abrahms used up all the lensflare in the new StarTrek movie.

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:iconzincspider:
Zincspider Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2013  Student Filmographer
I'd like to point out that 40 other people picked butts. You're welcome.
Even if it's a joke option.
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:icontrinity-fate:
Trinity-Fate Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Dammit Zinc, now the results are be skewed. 
40+ people have now effectively ducked giving me criticism in addition to those that choose the "everything is perfect" option. >8I

...But I guess I can improve on my butts.
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:iconzincspider:
Zincspider Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013  Student Filmographer
indeed they are be.
You can never improve your butts too much.
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:icontrinity-fate:
Trinity-Fate Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Don't you make fun of my typos. >8C

Maybe try to draw different types of butts?
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:iconzincspider:
Zincspider Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013  Student Filmographer
You changed your Avatar!
I will make fun of what I please, Mr. Butts.

Eh, just make them rounder and buttier. 

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:iconthetruesurvivor:
TheTrueSurvivor Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013
It's all wonderful, shhhh you don't need anything to improve :iconyourockplz:
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:icontrinity-fate:
Trinity-Fate Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
*grabs you by the shoulders*
BUT...
THERE'S GOTTA BE SOMETHING I CAN IMPROVE ON..
ANYTHING!! QAQ
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:iconthetruesurvivor:
TheTrueSurvivor Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013
O_O Geezus! I uhh uuu I dunno! I can't think of anything!! ;A;
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:icontrinity-fate:
Trinity-Fate Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's cool I was just making a reference. XD

But seriously though, can't you think of just one thing? D8
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:iconthetruesurvivor:
TheTrueSurvivor Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013
Reference to what? I thought you were out to commit 2nd degree murder on me ;A;

Uhhh hmm i love your style, colors, poses, I uh hmm no :c
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